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Pacing and Other Issues in Lovestrings

Posted by Lovestrings - August 20th, 2023


Hiya everyone. The more I think about Lovestrings Chapter 1, the more I notice the glaring issues in the plot/story/writing, such as the atrocious pacing and clarity. For that, I sincerely apologize.


The reason for this is because I ripped it directly from the webcomic, and the webcomic, at the time, was not at all a priority in my life. I wrote it really quickly and rushed it out on a whim for fun. This animation is not that, but that carried over because I didn't change anything from the comic writing wise.


Because of this, I would like to assure you that I will be attempting to resolve such issues when adapting Chapter 2 (which also has some weird pacing, if you read the comic you'll know what I mean). I won't promise that I'll succeed, but I will be completely rewriting chapter 2 for the animation so hopefully there's some level of higher quality writing.


Stay tuned! <3


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